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Lava (Victoria) REF SHEET *Updated*

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Omh! Small bean grew. 

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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

agreed with yogurtfrosting: the backstory is okay (yet semi-unrealistic, but it's fiction so it's okay) but the most troublesome part of victoria is the way she's drawn. tv heads don't usually look like just a box with another box in it, they have buttons/dials on the side and a speaker (if we're going for the old-timey tvs) and flatscreens are too thin to have a head stuffed in them. the colours are okay and semi realistic, since a person with lack of oxygen begins to have light grey/bluish skin, which is sort of seen in victoria. i wish there was a bit more explanation as to how she breathes and sees, since the tv is evidently on by the noise in the screen (and somehow not plugged in?) and with all the wires in a television, it makes it difficult to even fit a hand in there.

otherwise, nice job! she's cute and i like the style she's drawn in, but i wish she was a bit more worked on/i wish there was more realistic aspects of her.

can't wait to draw her!